i get the artisty and creativity of this video..

my one HUGE criticism is..
if your gonna have shots of her singing.. have reasonable amounts of it.. like it practically hardly had any shots of her singing.. and i mean i know some videos have NO SINGING SHOTS, but if ur gonna do it, atleast have enough.
do it right, or have none at all is what im saying.
wasnt a good ratio of story/singing shots
might aswell of cut the singing shots all together.
although they were hot while they lasted.