I think that what you posted made a ton of sense. But,
what about this? suppose you were to write a killer title?
I ain't saying your content is not solid., however what if you added a post title that makes people want more?
I mean New Song: Melanie Fiona - 'Colld Piece' | ..::That Grape Juice // ThatGrapeJuice.net::..

|| Thirsty? is a little boring. You could peek at Yahoo's home page and
watch how they create post headlines to get people interested.
You ight add a video or a pic oor two to grab people excited about everything've got to say.

Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little bit more
interesting.