Its honestly just too different to be a good song, just stick to the basics with a contemporary twist, done go so simple like Lady Gaga and The Cure, but a mideway between Bon Apetit and The Cure would be good, something with a chain smoker vibe might work on the charts too, although i feel the chainsmokers have kind of squeezed every bit of dance music with fake emotion tact onto it as they can right about now...